Saturday, July 2, 2022

THE LISTS ON NEWLYN QUAY: A NEW POEM TO ACCOMPANY WALTER LANGLEY'S PAINTING 'AMONG THE MISSING- SCENE IN A CORNISH FISHING VILLAGE, 1884'...

 The Lists On Newlyn Quay…



1884:


Even the weather seems dismal

As the fishing community mills around,

Horrified and for their losses weeping.

Disaster has once again affected

The lives of those left ashore,

Like the afflicted vessel, now wrecked.

The crowd becomes peripheral,

The list, scanned without a sound,

Holds all the attention, its power seeping

Into folks’ minds with grief infected.

And for families and friends stranded ashore,

Like the afflicted vessel, their lives too are wrecked…


She makes a cautious, initial approach,

For the discomfiting, impending

And helpless feeling of doom

Has rendered her ability even to hope, 

Redundant.

The final, timid and involuntary steps,

Hesitant,

Are taken towards the hand-written list,

Which upon her future will likely encroach:


She scans the names of the missing,

The feared drowned, the already dead

Until his name screams at her like a siren,

Confirming her man perished, the inevitable dread…


1917:


Once again the weather is dismal

As the fishing community gathers around,

Distraught about their losses and weeping.

Distress has again affected

The lives of those left ashore,

Like a sunken warship, now wrecked.

Others there become peripheral,

The list, read with barely a sound,

Commands all attention, its truth creeping

Into folks’ minds with grief blighted.

And for loved ones stranded upon an English shore,

Like corpses in trenches, their lives too are wrecked…


She once again makes a cautious approach,

The uncomfortable, disturbing

And hopeless feeling of gloom

Has again rendered her capability to hope,

Insignificant.

The final, knowing and hurtful steps,

Reminiscent 

Of a lifetime ago and another list,

Which forced her the world to reproach…


She scours the names of the missing

In action, the captured and the dead,

Until a name yells at her like a siren,

Announcing her son perished, the ultimate dread…



Pete Ray

1st July 2022


The work of Walter Langley is currently being shown at the Penlee Gallery, Penzance…


The above painting ‘Among the Missing- Scene in a Cornish Fishing Village, 1884’ refers to a lost fishing vessel and Langley painted a crowd of folks milling about near a list of the seamen missing at the local post office.


Langley had apparently been adversely affected by the loss of the lugger ‘Jane’ in 1880 off Mousehole, when six men and a boy died… 


Looking at the distressed woman, possibly mourning her husband, I wondered whether a similar situation might have arisen during 

World War I.


Perhaps the same woman, then around fifty years of age might have returned to another list to find out about her son’s fate, who was maybe missing too…



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